Question

is this right?

Answer 1

The vampires persecuted Emilys family; so she banned them all from the kingdom forever.

Answer 2

@Nnesha

Answer 3

I'm not sure there should be a ;
I believe a comma would work there.

Answer 4

also, there should be a comma in "Emily's" because it's possessive. it's HER family

Answer 5

and yeah, I agree with roman.

if you look at this website, it can help you with the rules of using semicolons: https://writing.wisc.edu/Handbook/Semicolons.html