This is the beginning of a horror story that I am writing. IT'S NOT FINISHED! I nly have he first three or four chapters done. I will post the finished thing in another post.

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anonymous · Answer

Here's the story.

anonymous · Answer

gimme your comments, judgments, other stuff. I hope to publish this some day!

anonymous · Answer

I'll give medals ^.^

anonymous · Answer

wow that's perfect!

tense, grammar and the flow of your story are good.
I just finished reading chapter 1 and I love to read the rest after  I came back (need to go to church :P)

good work! glad you posted it here and I'm lucky I'll have the chance to read a wonderful story ^_^

anonymous · Answer

@january123 
@Bahurverse_Luver
@Teddyiswatshecallsme 
@poopsiedoodle
@gibbs

january123 · Answer

NOO I CAN'T OPEN IT

gibbs · Answer

its good your amazing im going to finishreading it

bahurverse_luver · Answer

I really like it so far. imma finish reading X3

anonymous · Answer

@Data_LG2 
lemme know when u finish it

bahurverse_luver · Answer

Hat was really good. i cant wait til you finish it

bahurverse_luver · Answer

that*

anonymous · Answer

me too! Imma publish it, and make me $$

bahurverse_luver · Answer

lol is that what it's all about? money?

anonymous · Answer

well that and the fact that I love writing... and scholarships!

anonymous · Answer

btw I like ur profile pic @Bahurverse_Luver

january123 · Answer

LOL I WANNA READ IT...Plus i have some skill but like 2 years ago it crashed when i got homeschooled can somebody just copy and paste it to me

anonymous · Answer

thats a large copy and paste... like 17 pages...

january123 · Answer

OMG

january123 · Answer

well dang it must have been good...it's just prob this cpu but when i get back on my original one i can prob read it

anonymous · Answer

haha yeah, it's four chapters, but I made them long... Lemme know when u do read it! like pm me or somethin

january123 · Answer

I can't read all of it at once bc my mum...but i'll try to read most of it!!1

anonymous · Answer

thx

january123 · Answer

np yw

bahurverse_luver · Answer

i also like my pfp :3

january123 · Answer

LOL

anonymous · Answer

lol

bahurverse_luver · Answer

:p lol

anonymous · Answer

ugh sooo boooreed

bahurverse_luver · Answer

who isnt?

bahurverse_luver · Answer

i gt my puppy dog next to me ^_^ he sleepin

anonymous · Answer

lol k

anonymous · Answer

I'm gonna keep writing the story. Hope to have it finished by the end of the week.

anonymous · Answer

sure (:
it's going great so far!

oh I changed it to pdf if in case they can't  open the .docx file:

anonymous · Answer

ok, thx

anonymous · Answer

I would change it to where he is thinking instead of making it all third person.

anonymous · Answer

@Keisha98 Thx for the advice! Good thing you came in while it's still in early development, I would have never been able to go back and change it if I was further ahead ^.^

anonymous · Answer

Your wellcome

january123 · Answer

wow i have to find time to read this...i bet it's good:)

anonymous · Answer

it is good