Question

The song is over. I will record soon. Enjoy!

Answer 1

These memories......

Answer 2

@savanahdawson @Nahstya @bohotness

Answer 3

that I'll remember are always good for us.....

Answer 4

@january

Answer 5

@Tony00075309aabbc @thomaster @TheEdwardsFamily

Answer 6

@Sup???

Answer 7

When the time comes that's all we know

Answer 8

Dont mean to like budge in or anything but this would be more of a poem then a song since a song needs notes and it doesnt seem like youre writing notes

Answer 9

It is time for us to show...

Answer 10

the happiness within us.

Answer 11

memories of a great past....

Answer 12

Here is the whole song. I will record asap and post it soon. Thx for the help guys.

It is time to remember the great days
behind us
These memories that I'll remember
are always good for us
When the time comes that's all we know
It is time for us to show
the happiness within us
Memories of a great Past
Oh! Memories of a great Past
memories of a great past

It is time to forget the bad times
behind us
All that they do is hurt us and we’ll always cry to them
They will ruin our lives!
They will wound our hearts
But when the right time comes
All that we’ll remember are
Memories of a great past
Oh! memories of a great past
Memories of a great past!

Answer 13

the question marks shouldn't be there

Answer 14

@savanahdawson

Answer 15

I like it, but I think it needs a little bit more to it. I cant tell if there's a chorus or not....
Other then needing more lines, its awesome. Nice work everyone. :)

Answer 16

i will add more in a diff post though. Probably a part 2

Answer 17

yay! it sounds good