Question

;-; help i need help with my book i am done with the frist chapter

Answer 1

@k12andstudyislandhelp

Answer 2

What do you need help with?

Answer 3

with my book my friend @fallenangelorchid angel and @k12andstudyislandhelp help out ;-; i just cant think of anymore ;-;

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@fallenangelorchid can you help me with chapter 2?

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....

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;-;

Answer 7

is it that scary one you posted one time?

Answer 8

yeap

Answer 9

ooh, I'll help, I'd have to reread it but I would be glad to help :)

Answer 10

okat :D

Answer 11

would you mind posting it, or at list a link to it or whatever (I forgot what it was on, I've read a couple) on here?

Answer 12

I am still awake and alone in the pitch black in my room I can’t find the switch to my lamp . When I finally find the switch, I felt something else. So, I screamed in panic causing my mother to awake form sleeping. She rushed into my room in a panic of fear of finding me dead. When she gets there seeing I am alive she is happy with joy but worried, my mom says to me don’t scream like that again unless there is danger or your hurt. I say to my mother "mommy I just felt something, when I was reaching for my lamp switch".

My mother says its just my imagination and its not real. I ask her if she will stay with me tonight. She says to me 'its okay there is nothing in your room with you .' I just stare at her I ask 'her please turn on the light then before you go?' My mother says "if it makes you go to sleep at night" as she leaves I see something stick its hand out my closet 'MOMMY' I yell.She turns on the light and leaves. I thought that it would protect me but it didn’t. As I sleep I feel as if someone or something is watching me sleep. The next day I woke to see my closet door was wide open and my blinds had been shut closed so little light comes in . I was a little confused on who did that but it didn’t bother me. I got out of my bed and my closest door is now almost wide open. I dash out my room and downstairs to see my mother making breakfast and getting ready for work. I ask her if she was in my room after I to sleep to check on me. She told she did come in and then kissed my forehead and left the room. I asked her did she see the closet door little open she told me it wasn’t open or little open was closed when she was in my room. I was going to ask her something else but I hear a car horn honk and I know it's mom's ride to work she said to me are you going to wear that to school and I just said yes and grab my backpack and run out the door and walk to the bus stop and saw her ride with her in the car go pass me. As I waited for the bus I see some kids coming to wait for the bus I start talking to this one girl and learned her name is Kate and she ask if I just moved her and I told her yes I just moved here and as we talk we see the bus coming closer to us . The bus is here I walk on to the bus and I see ten kids on there one side is a girl boy paten and the other is random I sit by the girl by just met I saw two more kids get on, a boy and a girl. Kate calls the boy over and we all talk to each other until we get close to school I was looking out the window and I saw, or I thought I saw a person in a house I guess I was just seeing things. I forgot to tell my new friend Kate my name I say to Kate my name is Skylar. Kate says to me nice to meet you Skylar and we start getting off the bus as the bus opens it doors we get off the bus and walk in to the school it was really big high school. As we walked through the schools doors there were a lot of people in the hallway Kate showed me the way to the office. The office lady gives me a paper that shows my locker number and my class number and my classes I have I go to my locker which is by Kate's locker. I get my books and I go to my classes. My first class, the one I hate most, is math. As I walk to math class the bell rings. I start to run to class hoping I am not late on my first day here so as I come in the math class I am relieved that I am not late. :D As I sit down to take a seat the teacher comes in who looks my age, I happen to be 17 about to turn 18. He says my name so I have to introduce myself. Right when I was going to say my name the bell rang. "I knew the bell saves." after the bell rung for class to end I was Rushing to the cafeteria, I bump into a boy who looks about my age. He looks me up and down before walking off. Shaking my head, I get my lunch and take a seat a Kate's table . After lunch I went to my next class gym which I thought was easy but I was completely wrong, it was horrible... Except for the fact that I saw him... the guy I bumped into.... he doesn't seem like he is struggling to finishes the oblique courses . I hate School. Walking home, I toss my backpack in the corner and shut my door, my eyes spotting something strange on my bed. Steadily walking closer I see the board I look around my room, noticing that the closet door was now open a little and I was trying to figure out how did the ouija board got on my bed. I begin to walk away when I see the board start moving. As if on que my mother walks in the room. "Honey, I made some cookie's I was just wondering if you wanted an--" Her eyes divert to the Ouija board which lay on my bed. She rushes towards it and picks it up. "There are cookies downstairs if you want some..." She dashes out, looking nervous. (What would my mother be doing with a Ouija board...) I forget the thought and grab my books, hoping on my bed and getting to my homework. Hearing the wind rustle, I glance outside. My eyes notice the darkness of the room and I finish my work, tossing it in my bag and pushing it to the side. Plugging in my earphones, I find myself dozing off into a deep sleep. When I woke up I look at my clock its was 9:00 am in the morning. I jumped up in a rush to get ready for school. I skipped breakfast and ran out the door in a rush to get to school hoping I wasn't late to my first class so I nearly forgot my backpack I grab it and as I was walking to the bus stop I start to think what was that noisy I heard last night as I slept I remember the sounds and I wonder how and where did my mother get the oja board and why was it in my room and on my bed. As I get closer to the bus stop I see Kate and some boy standing next to her the same boy I saw yesterday at gym class hmm start to run to them and right then they turn and look at me I saw their face was gone nothing but empty I start running the other way I try to run faster but I start to slow down everywhere is complete pitch black I wake up its still nighttime I stayed up that night not wanting to go to sleep again africed the nightmare will happen aagain so I stayed up all night

Answer 13

You added some since I read it, so you want to try to think of more to add?

Answer 14

I mean like another chapter since you said you're done with this one

Answer 15

add more yes

Answer 16

kk, do you have any ideas or are you just coming up blank?

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blanks i did have one but i dont know how to spell really good

Answer 18

oh that's ok, you can type it and If the spellings that bad, well I'm sure I can figure it out and help you spell it right. I have plenty of words I like to use that I spell wrong...so I've gotten good at let's guess this word

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:)

Answer 20

ok, so whenever my friends get writers block I bombard them with questions about the book and it usually helps them, I can think of at least a few that may possibly help you, or help me help you, would you mind me asking a bunch of q's? some may seem pointless but it'll prolly help keep your gears turning

Answer 21

okay

Answer 22

OK so do you know exactly what it was in her closet yet? why was it in her closet in the first place? What exactly was the oiga (idk how to spell that) board doing in her room? What does this Kate girl and the boy she bumped into have to do with any of this? Is the whole town going to be affected by this? where is skylar's father? why isn't he there as well? Why did they move there in the first place?

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omg okay let think first for the question about ger father he died and they reason they move is because they were froce to and basely he is died and no it doesnt and ojia i have acttly put in why it was in there yet band you have to find out whats in her closet and its in the closet the place childs are scaried to check there for monsters

Answer 24

Do you want his story to be short and sweet? that would be easiest if this is your first

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...ok so prolly not sweet but you get what I mean

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XD :P sure

Answer 27

@fallenangelorchid can you please help me and @cecormier can you both help me please ;=-;

Answer 28

Is Kate and that boy going to be important in this story? If they are I think you should just start out the chapter by having her go to school and becoming closer to them or whatever, it prolly wouldn't be good for a whole chapter but it would give you a place to start and time to think out how you want to procede with the rest of the chapter

Answer 29

mhm yes the boy is a main charter kate is his sister which skyler adn the boy doesnt know that

Answer 30

i cant think ;-;

Answer 31

ok, so what is Skylar's relationship with the boy going to be? are they going to be friends or dating or enemies?

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dating

Answer 33

oh ok, so you should build a little of a relationship, not too much but enough that we know he will be staying around the book

Answer 34

okay