Question

Which of the following sentences is punctuated correctly?
(From her bedroom,) Hayden could see the entire city including the mayor's house, and the park.
From her bedroom, Hayden could see the entire city (including the mayor's house and the park.)
From her bedroom,—Hayden could see the entire city—including the mayor's house and the park.
From her bedroom, Hayden could see the entire city (including the mayor's house and the park).
@sleepyjess

Answer 1

What do you think?

Answer 2

The second one.

Answer 3

No, it's: D. From her bedroom, Hayden could see the entire city (including the mayor's house and the park).

Periods go OUTSIDE of parentheses. :)

Answer 4

I was going to go with D too.

Answer 5

Ok thank you @vera_ewing & @leahhhmorgannn

Answer 6

No problem :)