Question

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Answer 1

After feeling horrible for a week, the woman finally decided to see a doctor with a fever and a severe cough.

Which of these is the clearest and most effective way to revise the sentence above?

After feeling horrible for a week, the woman with a fever and a severe cough finally
decided to see a doctor.

The woman finally decided to see a doctor with a fever and a severe cough after feeling horrible for a week.

The woman finally decided to see with a fever and a severe cough a doctor after feeling horrible for a week.

Finally, after feeling horrible for a week, the woman decided to see a doctor with a fever and a severe cough.

Answer 2

C?

Answer 3

Hmmm... I'd say B

Answer 4

Was I right?

Answer 5

YES!

Answer 6

~Happy Dance~ YAY! :D

Answer 7

After feeling horrible for a week, the women with a fever and a severe cough decided to see a doctor.