Could you guys give me feed back on how this is so far? Thanks!

It was better for him to be hurt now than later
I guess all I did was get stuck
Stuck in what I thought was forever
He didn't see it that way
But saw it as a joke that was funny
For a guy that cared so much
He has that one talent of pretending not to care

Question

Could you guys give me feed back on how this is so far? Thanks!

It was better for him to be hurt now than later
I guess all I did was get stuck 
Stuck in what I thought was forever
He didn't see it that way
But saw it as a joke that was funny
For a guy that cared so much 
He has that one talent of pretending not to care

anonymous · Answer

Sounds great so far, good job!!!

anonymous · Answer

its awesome.lol.write something so that we can give medals:P

anonymous · Answer

I actually love this please write more