Question

Which revision best corrects the errors in the given sentence?

I'll do something quiet such as reading, gardening, or bird-watching instead of riding roller coasters with you.

A.
I'll do something quiet: such as reading, gardening, or bird-watching instead of riding roller coasters with you.

B.
I'll do something quiet: such as reading, gardening, or bird-watching—instead of riding roller coasters with you.

C.
I'll do something quiet—such as, reading, gardening, or bird-watching—instead of riding roller coasters with you.
I cant decide if it is B or C. help?

Answer 1

Lemme check.

Answer 2

ok

Answer 3

anyone?

Answer 4

B.

Answer 5

how do you know?

Answer 6

i couldnt decide between B or C bc B had the two dots and C had the line thing

Answer 7

it was C.. thanks for trying tho