Question

Read the paragraph and answer the question that follows:

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens. The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?
The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.
The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.
If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of liv

Answer 1

@igreen plz help????

Answer 2

@TheSmartOne help plzz???????

Answer 3

Read the paragraph and answer the question that follows:

The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens. The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?
The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.
The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.
If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.
With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Answer 4

Look at these two lines:

The loud and steady \(\bf wail ~would~ warn ~citizens~ of~ approaching ~danger.\) If past history is an indication, \(\bf the~sirens~ will ~save~ hundreds~ of ~lives.\)

Answer 5

pk i looked at it @TheSmartOne

Answer 6

And look at these two lines:

The town of Belmond, Iowa,\(\bf~ needs~ to ~add ~weather~ sirens.\)
With a prediction of a deadly storm season, \(\bf the~ alert ~system~ is~ needed ~immediately.\)

Answer 7

Do you notice redundancy in the last two lines I told you to look at?

Answer 8

yes @TheSamertOne

Answer 9

@thesmartone

Answer 10

Soo have you found the answer now? @marc1313