Is anyone good at writing metaphoric poems?:)

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anonymous · Answer

i am

anonymous · Answer

Im not but i had to compliment your picture

anonymous · Answer

haha thank you:) @KennaMSucksAtSchool and would you mind helping me? @Xnlovely

anonymous · Answer

sure hit me :)

anonymous · Answer

ok.. heres the prompt...

To begin your metaphor poem, consider who you are and then connect yourself to a specific object that has similar characteristics to yourself. For example, you might be “a rose that is afraid to spread its petals” or “a pencil that is always sharpened.” Once you have decided on the metaphor that you will be using to describe yourself, extend it further by thinking of the object you have chosen and your own characteristics. Use the preceding examples as models to help guide you.

anonymous · Answer

okay say you are an electric gate when people come near you that bother you or upset you u get a burst of electric madness do you get it?

anonymous · Answer

yeah! It needs to be pretty long tho :P

anonymous · Answer

Just add more emphasis into it i started it off for you

anonymous · Answer

ok:) can you think of a metaphor for perseverance?

anonymous · Answer

@Xnlovely

anonymous · Answer

hmm that ones alittle challenging

anonymous · Answer

but ill help

anonymous · Answer

Sometimes we struggle through a tasteless coffee till the last sip, then we find sugar laying at the bottom, thats life, sweetened but not stirred well I just made this up lol

anonymous · Answer

thats great! thank you!

anonymous · Answer

Anytime ^.^

anonymous · Answer

do you need help on anymore?