The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens. The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?
The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens. The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.

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The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens. The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger. If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?
 The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.  The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.  If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.

anonymous · Answer

With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

Which sentence should be revised to eliminate redundancy?
 The town of Belmond, Iowa, needs to add weather sirens.  The loud and steady wail would warn citizens of approaching danger.  If past history is an indication, the sirens will save hundreds of lives.  With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately.

anonymous · Answer

ik the answer but can you tell me what you think it is?

anonymous · Answer

D. With a prediction of a deadly storm season, the alert system is needed immediately. 

In the first sentence, it already said that the sirens were needed. This is repeated.

anonymous · Answer

Can you Medal/and of Fan?

anonymous · Answer

or not of sorry

anonymous · Answer

oh sorry I had left thanks can you help with some more???

anonymous · Answer

sure :)