A poem by Juan Olivarez Enjoy
At first I couldn't get enough, Now I just can't make it stop. No rain in the desert that was rough, Around here there's no dry spot. It's been raining everyday, Since I came back to my home. The sunshine just can't seem to stay, Hurricanes and storms, won't leave us alone. I like the rain like everyone, But it's been over done a bit. We'll need a boat before we're done, I'm about to throw a fit. There's a fish just swimming by, Waving his soggy fin at me. All I could muster was a 'hi', From my perch up in the tree.
There's a fish just swimming by, Waving his soggy fin at me. All I could muster was a 'hi', From my perch up in the tree. I laughed really hard while reading that last stanza. Please write more :)
I love it
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Nicely done! I like the last stanza, it's the most eye-catching. :)
Nice Poem. I liked it. :)
thank you :D I just want ppl to read it because i am sure ppl share the same love for rain as i do
Wow Good Job !, I love it !
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you should see the rain here, it's crazy but of cause beautiful
:)
awesome job :D i luv it
thanks
Writing isn't my best subject, however I did like the poem! The last stanza gave me a chuckle.
Very nice. I especially like the last paragraph
I liked it very much! =)
thank you everyone
still, not cool
Is it okay now ?
Why ?
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thankyou for fixing it miami
i was about to withdraw my medal til i saw u fixed it :)
Nice
:) Thank all of you :D Won't do it again
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