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OpenStudy (anonymous):

A poem by Juan Olivarez Enjoy

OpenStudy (anonymous):

At first I couldn't get enough, Now I just can't make it stop. No rain in the desert that was rough, Around here there's no dry spot. It's been raining everyday, Since I came back to my home. The sunshine just can't seem to stay, Hurricanes and storms, won't leave us alone. I like the rain like everyone, But it's been over done a bit. We'll need a boat before we're done, I'm about to throw a fit. There's a fish just swimming by, Waving his soggy fin at me. All I could muster was a 'hi', From my perch up in the tree.

OpenStudy (geneticrockhopper247):

There's a fish just swimming by, Waving his soggy fin at me. All I could muster was a 'hi', From my perch up in the tree. I laughed really hard while reading that last stanza. Please write more :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I love it

OpenStudy (anonymous):

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OpenStudy (anonymous):

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eclipsedstar (eclipsedstar):

Nicely done! I like the last stanza, it's the most eye-catching. :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Nice Poem. I liked it. :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thank you :D I just want ppl to read it because i am sure ppl share the same love for rain as i do

Awolflover1 (awolflover1):

Wow Good Job !, I love it !

OpenStudy (anonymous):

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OpenStudy (praetorian.10):

you should see the rain here, it's crazy but of cause beautiful

OpenStudy (anonymous):

:)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

awesome job :D i luv it

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thanks

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Writing isn't my best subject, however I did like the poem! The last stanza gave me a chuckle.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Very nice. I especially like the last paragraph

OpenStudy (haileyd):

I liked it very much! =)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

thank you everyone

TheSmartOne (thesmartone):

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OpenStudy (domebotnos):

still, not cool

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Is it okay now ?

OpenStudy (anonymous):

Why ?

OpenStudy (kidrah69):

.

OpenStudy (perl):

thankyou for fixing it miami

OpenStudy (anonymous):

i was about to withdraw my medal til i saw u fixed it :)

OpenStudy (kyanthedoodle):

Nice

OpenStudy (anonymous):

:) Thank all of you :D Won't do it again

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