Question

I need help writing a song for school about not getting accepted by society. I am not a song writer by all means, so your help will be greatly appreciated!!! ^_^

Answer 1

hmmm, i may be able to help u

Answer 2

Sounds great!!

Answer 3

Do you have any ideas so far?

Answer 4

No, Im really stuck >~<

Answer 5

Here's my idea for the first few lines:

Their hearts beat to the pace of society,
The world spinning under their feet.
My heart beats to the pace of originality,
But they can't hear it beat.

Answer 6

OMG LIPOWELL I LOVE IT.

Its perfect. Okay so how in the world did you do that so i can add to it...? o-o

Answer 7

think about the bulling or stuff that you see at school.

Answer 8

Im home schooled xD

Answer 9

It doesn't have to be school then, think about the things you would see people dealing with anywhere if they were dressed funny, ext. the first thing I think of is mean stares

Answer 10

The thing is I only write stories I cant rhyme things together to make them sound good. I would rhyme mouse with house.

Answer 11

So something like

Their stares weaken my bones,
Their glares feed on my soul.
I can feel their judgement through my skin,
They whine in distress,
But call me less,
Because they know I can't be brought down.

Answer 12

I like to look up words that rhyme with things I want to rhyme it with and it helps a lot

Answer 13

@hysusonic

Answer 14

mine is really profane

Answer 15

Okay so

Their hearts beat to the pace of society,
The world spinning under their feet.
My heart beats to the pace of originality,
But they can't hear it beat.

Their stares weaken my bones,
Their glares feed on my soul.
I can feel their judgement through my skin,
They whine in distress,
But call me less,
Because they know I can't be brought down.

Now for chorus I would say

Answer 16

Idk -_-

Answer 17

Lets make a small list of things people who are considered unaccepted deal with

Answer 18

Flappers

Answer 19

racists, nerds, geeks, dweebs, fat people, ugly people, homophobes, gays

Answer 20

lol you got it down dont you @hysusonic

Answer 21

What adam said xD

Answer 22

i'm in most of those categories so yea

Answer 23

haha aw dont bring yourself down like that

Answer 24

Shush -_- no your not.

It has to tie to how they wernt accepted in the 1920's

Answer 25

Except the dweeb one ;p hahaha

Answer 26

okay then flappers is good

Answer 27

the 20's they couldn't be black or gay or disabled

Answer 28

Mostly their new style of clothes music and dance

Answer 29

Im just about ready to give up and sing Rianna -_-

Dont judge idk how to spwll her name

Answer 30

what song?

Answer 31

I cant lol she said i have to write it

Answer 32

haha you got this

Answer 33

add some stuff from other songs and you're golden

Answer 34

my whole life has revolved around their rules,
....now what

Answer 35

it doesnt have to always rhyme

Answer 36

i don't like the way they make me look
in fact i hate it
they don't know my style only theirs

Answer 37

But i dont care anymore Im going to live my life..? omg it sucks xDD

Answer 38

hahah no its fine. I like the "they dont know my style only their's" but you should probably say their own instead of their's

Answer 39

D: lip whats your name?

Answer 40

wait i actually do guud? SWAG

Answer 41

lindsay :)

Answer 42

hahaha yes you did

Answer 43

LINDSAY IDK HOW TO WRITE MUSIC I WILL END UP MAKING IT OUND LKE DO YOU WANNA BUILD A SNOWMAN. ASK ADAM.

Answer 44

ADAM IS THIS TRUE

Answer 45

IT IS BUT I LOVE FROZEN SO LET IT GO

Answer 46

omg hhahahahaha

Answer 47

hahaha thats so funny

Answer 48

see that is why i love him


OKAY BACK TO WORK. I NEED THIS DONE

LINDSAY CAN YOU COME UP WITH THE CHORUS?

Answer 49

wait hold on are yall dating?

Answer 50

No no xD

Answer 51

hahaha just wondering lol

Answer 52

okay lets do this

Answer 53

Im ready Lindsay o-o im ready

Answer 54

you gotta lose yourself in the pumped up kicks
you gotta run gotta run faster than a house burning to the ground

idk i just put some random song lyrics together xDDDD

Answer 55

wth xD

Answer 56

hahaha what the heck

Answer 57

#dealwithit i'm weird xDDD

Answer 58

sameee

Answer 59

okay back to business

Answer 60

We all are.

GUYS. FOCUS. LINDSAY I DONT KNOW WHAT TO PAY YOU IN BECAUSE I USUALLY PAY PEOPLE WITH POPSICLES

Answer 61

what you dont have to pay me with anything haha

Answer 62

wait you owe me ton of popsicles @LeilaJudeh

Answer 63

usually when i cnat do my hw I give people things to help.


Once i get there. dw xD

Answer 64

Okay so
My whole life has revolved around their rules,
They don't know my style only their own.
They prance around with gold and jewels,

Answer 65

wait whats the melody? o.O

Answer 66

but don't know how to stay alone
those attention seeking hoes

Answer 67

adam -_-

Answer 68

lmao

Answer 69

best i could think of that rhymed with own and was about people

Answer 70

alone?

Answer 71

I needa sing this and have it in today ;-;

CAN THE MELODY BE TO DO YOU WANNA BUILD A SNOWMAN??

Answer 72

depends do we have the whole song?

Answer 73

i dont wanna sing the whole song, my voice sucks xDDD

Answer 74

hmmmm

Answer 75

lin did you have a melody in mind?

Answer 76

somewhat but idk how to communicate it to you lol

Answer 77

vocaroo voice message

Answer 78

Lin...? o-o

Answer 79

haha sorry im working on math at the same time doing this

Answer 80

whats vacaroo voice message

Answer 81

:o okay im sorry love, and its a thing hold on lemme get the link

Answer 82

http://vocaroo.com/

Answer 83

ugh am i gonna have to sing?

Answer 84

^_^ just a little

Answer 85

oh no lol

Answer 86

I just need the melody, hum it if you want

Answer 87

okay i will im not sure if i have a microphone though

Answer 88

Idk how to solve that o-o

maybe its built in?
oi

Answer 89

nvm i found it haha

Answer 90

thank heavens

Answer 91

i have to go soon :/ so if you dont have it done I'll see it later

Answer 92

okay im almost done with it

Answer 93

Okay n,n

Answer 94

okay here it is
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0a F551ttLIs

Answer 95

oops i typed it in wrong its
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0aF551ttLIs

Answer 96

it says media not found

Answer 97

ugh okay ill try it again