hi can i get some feedback on a poem i wrote a while ago?

Strong,
come along and I'll show you how to be it.
Listen,
as they say it'll be okay.
Laugh,
even when your laugh fills only half.
Sing,
trust me,
it helps ease the sting.
Cry,
and eventually you'll find,
you'll be able to Fly.

Question

hi can i get some feedback on a poem i wrote a while ago?

Strong,
come along and I'll show you how to be it.
Listen, 
as they say it'll be okay.
Laugh, 
even when your laugh fills only half.
Sing,
trust me,
it helps ease the sting.
Cry,
and eventually you'll find,
you'll be able to Fly.

jackofalltradez · Answer

This could be a song :D
I enjoy the rhythm and flow of this poem