Question

hi can I get some feedback on a poem i wrote?


Strong,
come along and I'll show you how to be it.
Listen,
when they say it'll be okay.
Love,
Even though,
it can be hard to show.
Laugh,
even when,
your laugh fills only half.
Sing,
trust me,
it helps ease the sting.
Cry,
and eventually you'll find,
your able to Fly.

Answer 1

I like it, very good.