A big greyish rounded bulk, the size, perhaps, of a bear, was rising slowly and painfully out of the cylinder. As it bulged up and caught the light, it glistened like wet leather.

Two large dark—coloured eyes were regarding me steadfastly . The mass that framed them, the head of the thing, was rounded, and had, one might say, a face. There was a mouth under the eyes, the lipless brim of which quivered and panted, and dropped saliva. The whole creature heaved and pulsated convulsively. A lank tentacular appendage gripped the edge of the cylinder, another swayed in the air.

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A big greyish rounded bulk, the size, perhaps, of a bear, was rising slowly and painfully out of the cylinder. As it bulged up and caught the light, it glistened like wet leather.

Two large dark—coloured eyes were regarding me steadfastly . The mass that framed them, the head of the thing, was rounded, and had, one might say, a face. There was a mouth under the eyes, the lipless brim of which quivered and panted, and dropped saliva. The whole creature heaved and pulsated convulsively. A lank tentacular appendage gripped the edge of the cylinder, another swayed in the air.

anonymous · Answer

What special word choices has the author made here to give you a specific reaction?

anonymous · Answer

@KyanTheDoodle

kyanthedoodle · Answer

Now what's your opinion on this?

anonymous · Answer

big greyish rounded bulk, Two large dark—coloured eyes.

anonymous · Answer

@KyanTheDoodle ^

kyanthedoodle · Answer

Yep I would've said that too

anonymous · Answer

okay thx

kyanthedoodle · Answer

Now I gotta work on my own stuff.