Question

please help asap
will give medal + fan + testimonial
question in the comments.

Answer 1

this is an interesting assignment. lol I'm about to ask what have you done so far xD

Answer 2

ikr lol I keep laughing doing this assignment xD I can't take it seriously but it's fun at least, I just suck at writing songs since I've never had to before.

Answer 3

I'm still revising what happened in the story, I may take awhile. Try posting it also in the music section (:

Answer 4

one more advice! Try copying the whole lyrics in your notepad or sth and just replace some words, i think it will be easier.

Answer 5

Oh good advice!

Answer 6

just a question, why 'run'?

Answer 7

Cassius was plotting against Caser and I believe it was Brutus who ended up killing him? I don't remember but Cassius did try and get Brutus on his side.

Answer 8

@Data_LG2 and @lostintime Sorry to intrude your post but @Data_LG2 have you read romeo and juliet?

Answer 9

Um no sorry I don't really like Romeo and Juliet.

Answer 10

Me neither but i am being forced and i dont understand crap it says

Answer 11

Omg I feel bad for you good luck! You can try reading it through sparknotes they sometimes translate it to the "now" english and you might understand it better.

Answer 12

me neither, honestly, I only read the summarize of shakespeare's plays- coz I don't understand them lol

\(\color{blue}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @lostintime
Cassius was plotting against Caser and I believe it was Brutus who ended up killing him? I don't remember but Cassius did try and get Brutus on his side.
\(\color{blue}{\text{End of Quote}}\)

Really? But I thought all the senates (idk what's the proper term) attacked Caesar altogether? Brutus is the one who stabbed Caesar right into his chest.

Answer 13

Yeah that's why I said Brutus was the one who ended up killing Caeser lol

to think about it this song's pov could work for both Cassius and Brutus now i am conflicted.

Answer 14

Oh and yeah I have nothing personal against Shakespeare but I don't understand what he says. I'm sure he was a talented guy in his time but maybe they should have us read more stuff based on the now than old stuff.

Answer 15

haha that's okay :P From what I remember, Cassius was the one who is really behind all this. He brainwashed Brutus that Caesar is becoming to powerful and I think he even give Brutus fake letters, so that his plans will be justified.

Just a suggestion, instead of run maybe change it to 'kill' . So it is like Cassus talking to Brutus about killing CAesar.

Lyrics of the original song:
[2x]
When you're ready come and get it
Na na na na [3x]

When you're ready
When you're ready
When you're ready come and get it
Na na na na [3x]

Edited version:
[2x]
When you're ready come and kill him
Noooow [3x]

When you're ready
When you're ready
When you're ready come and kill him
Noooow [3x]

LOL nvm, I'm laughing with this one xD

Answer 16

@Here_to_Help15 if you have any questions about romeo and juliet, just post it and maybe I can help you answer it using our friend Mr. G ;)

Answer 17

OMG That makes perfect sense! Instead of Cassius towards Caeser
the song should be Cassius towards Brutus!

lol ikr I think its funny though it shouldn't be xD but I think its genius, do you mind if I use that for my song? The best I can give you is a medal though I wish I could give more you're always helping me and you're so nice :]

Answer 18

Nah it's okay, I'm happy to help.besides, I'm enjoying this xD I will not stay long here in OS if I only care about the medals :P And sure, use that.

So do you have something for the 1st stanza of the song?

Answer 19

@Data_LG2 omg I know it looks crappy but I am going to add like repetition like for "i know what you're feeling" i'll repeat "feeling" several times since she repeats in her song a word too i think its "invitation" and "patient" that she repeats but anyway this is all of the song
It's more than 10 lines which is good so opinion? :]

Answer 20

sorry late reps!

LOL this turns really awesome ! xD
all I can say is...

"BRAVO!"

no more suggestions because it is perfect lol

Answer 21

YAY! Thank you so much for your help!! :]

Answer 22

np!

if ever you decided to complete the whole song, I would love to read it :D

Answer 23

I actually might lol I think it would be interesting If I do I will for sure post it here and tag you! :]
Also, I'll tell you what grade I get on it, thanks again! Have a nice night/day.

Answer 24

yay! I'll wait for your tag ;)

No problem, have a goodnight too! see ya round