Question

i am going to write this big paper and i would like your opinion.. but its going to be awhile.

Answer 1

I'll check back soon

Answer 2

ok, so i am here on this website right now to tell people about life and bullying. i see people come on here and get bullied both girls and boys and i don't think that is fair. god has created us equally we all don't need heavy make up or kill ourselves just because a person is putting you down you are better then them, stand up tall speak out against bullying! you dont need to be slim skinny or wear make up or make bad mistakes to prove that are cool. in my belief everyone has BEAUTY, PERSONALITY, EVERYTHING YOU CAN THINK OF! i just dont get some people out there we are all stereotypes just different genetics. i believe the victims out there who has something done to them, tell someone, stand tall, stay strong, get help, just believe in life things will get better give it a chance. ignore the haters just be you. and if you have a kid when your a teenager and you get judged for it, having a kid is the most beautiful thing people act like its the worst crime ever but being pregnant is the most awesome thing your creating another human being. LETS MAKE A STAND LETS SPREAD THIS AROUND THE WORLD MAKE BULLIES GO AWAY!!!!!

Answer 3

@logan13 @DarkMoonZ

Answer 4

@rebeka @Holly00d1248

Answer 5

that really good and i so agree

Answer 6

@isry98

Answer 7

@PRAETORIAN.10

Answer 8

i concur with the aforementioned

Answer 9

I am here today on this website to tell people about life and bullying. People visit this website and get bullied. Both girls and boys. God has created us equally so that we all don't need heavy makeup or to give our lives up. Just because a person is putting you down doesn't mean to give up. You are better than that! Stand up tall, speak out against bullying! You don't need to be slim skinny or wear makeup or make bad mistakes to prove that are cool. In my belief everyone has BEAUTY, PERSONALITY, and EVERYTHING YOU CAN THINK OF! I don't understand why some people out there bully others due to beauty, personality, and sadly, so many more reasons that I cannot list them all! I believe the victims out there who have had something done to them, tell someone, stand tall, stay strong, get help, believe in life and things will get better! Ignore the haters just be you! If you have a kid when you’re a teenager and you get judged for it, having a kid I think, is the most beautiful thing! People act like it’s the worst crime ever but being pregnant is the most awesome thing because you’re creating another human being. LETS MAKE A STAND LETS SPREAD THIS AROUND THE WORLD MAKE BULLIES GO AWAY!!!!!

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Ok, so I made little/large edit to your essay, re-did grammar, spelling, did some changes to sentence that could use some touch up's and better "word play" I suppose you can call it. Personally though, love the essay read it over 2 times before I started editing it and it is a really creative persuasive essay! I hope this helps, have a wonderful day, if you need anymore Writing help tag me or message me. Also sick hair! lol.
Have a good one and good luck on your essay.