Question

I added a couple more chapters to my story "The Inheritance." I haven't been able to make much progress in the past month or so, I have been busy with school and such. But please, feel free to tell me what you think!

Answer 1

Here's the story.

Answer 2

Well, may as well get started with tags...
@january123 @Anastashia @Awolflover1 @CountryGurl15 @little_rebel @Pika_Pika @prettygirl876 @redeemed1312 @roman_princess @Ryland*Smith_ @Teddyiswatshecallsme @clynnew

Wow that's a lot more tags than I thought I was gonna put in XD

Answer 3

I like it, I am still reading the first chapter though.

Answer 4

Awesome

Answer 5

OMG I am in love with this book!

Answer 6

lol I plan to publish at some point XD

Answer 7

i love it

Answer 8

thx babe ;)

Answer 9

oooooh Kevin has a gf! =P
So far i love it!!!

Answer 10

XD

Answer 11

lol

Answer 12

ur welcome @KevinM.Williams159

Answer 13

imma keep writing the story!

Answer 14

thats a ggood idea because it is really good

Answer 15

Yea keep up the good work, Kev it's really good so far =)

Answer 16

yeah it is

Answer 17

lol Yup! =)

Answer 18

ugh i sneezed again

Answer 19

I already love the story. I read the 1st two chapters already. I DON'T WANNA SPOIL THE REST!!!

Answer 20

haha i'll post the rest when I'm completely finished XD

Answer 21

OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UR A NOVAL WRITER JUS LIKE MEHHH
I LOVE THA STORY!!

Answer 22

One comment: When you're describing Madison in chapter 1, you used "pail blue eyes." Isn't it supposed to be pale, not pail?

Answer 23

Yes, there are a few typos, @geneticrockhopper247 , that was meant to be pale, not pail.

Answer 24

Okay, just checking :)

Answer 25

yeah ur good man XD

Answer 26

I love the book. you should totally publish it.

Answer 27

I will when it's done

Answer 28

Good : )

Answer 29

XD

Answer 30

I've made SO much progress in the last few weeks... Not really, DAMN YOU SCHOOLLLLLLL