Question

Which statement describes the revision, if any is needed, that corrects the sentence?

"If you don't mind," she remarked, "would you please take your shoes off at the door."

A.
Delete the comma after the word mind.

B.
The word would should be capitalized.

C.
No revision is necessary.

D.
The period belongs outside of the quotation marks.

@mehek14

Answer 1

@texaschic101

Answer 2

@mathstudent55

Answer 3

no revision necessary

Answer 4

thank you!

Answer 5

YW :)

Answer 6

There needs to be a revision, but none of the answer choices.

Answer 7

It's odd that they don't offer a question mark as a revision, since it is a question. But texaschic is right, out of the other options.

Answer 8

^

Answer 9

I was just going by the answer choices

Answer 10

I noticed about the question mark as well....and it should go inside the ending quotation mark.