Question

How is my poem? lol

Answer 1

post that at writing section

Answer 2

Day by day I think of you,
How can all of this be true?
I can't believe you're really gone,
I still can't accept it,
Even after so long.
Just the thought of you makes me cry,
I never even got the chance to say goodbye.
Every picture, every letter,
I don't know if it will ever get better.
I always smell your familiar scent,
It makes me think of all of the times we've spent.
I know we didn't always get along,
And every time we talked, it would always go wrong.
So many things I never got to say,
I never imagined you'd ever be so far away.
You were my brother,
And I loved you like no other.
In my heart you'll always be,
You'll be my guide and help me see.
I'll never forget your soothing voice,
I would take your place if I had a choice.
But now I have to let you rest,
Although without you my world's a mess.
I miss you with all of my heart,
I wish we never had to part.
I know you're always by my side,
So now I guess this is my goodbye...

Answer 3

http://openstudy.com/study#/groups/Writing <--- here

Answer 4

oops srry :)

Answer 5

it's okay :-)

Answer 6

It's ok. Just make sure to follow the rules. :)

Answer 7

I Will :)

Answer 8

@Lover9 is this really your poem, written by you?

Answer 9

No my brother said he did it and i thought it was good so i wanted to see other peoples opinion...why did he copy ?

Answer 10

@EclipsedStar

Answer 11

I think so. @Lover9

Answer 12

I googled it and I got some results.

Answer 13

hes such a liar....i hate him sometimes

Answer 14

\(\color{blue}{\text{Originally Posted by}}\) @Lover9
How is my poem? lol
\(\color{blue}{\text{End of Quote}}\)
You said it was yours, not your brother's. Please don't lie. Thanks.

Answer 15

.......he always take credit for everything so...i wanted it this time....

Answer 16

Still the same as not telling the truth.

Answer 17

well...i know im sorry but he had it coming! Hes selfish sometimes...

Answer 18

Is your brother an os user? If he is I would like to have a nice chat with him. If he isn't then kindly tell him for me not to repeat that mistake as he could get sued.

Answer 19

hes not and ill tell him thanks :)

Answer 20

Haha. I would love to chat with your brother. It may be a one sided conversation.