can someone check my research paper and see if it's good?
This research report is about how cigarettes are bad for you. Smoking is the worst thing ever made in the history of inventions. It is also the most causes of death because a lot of people smoke. Smoking around non-smoker's can also hurt them because the smoke in the air goes into the non-smokers lungs. Here are some things that smoking causes. Smoking is very harmful to your body. First are your lunges. Your lunges have the smoke go into it. This then makes it hard to breath. You’ll cough a lot too. When smoking, you can damage your lunges really bad. Smoking also is bad because it will decrease your lifespan. It takes away ten years of your life. Smokers that quit before 35 will gain about 10 years back of their life. Those who stop even in the middle age will at least gain about 5 years back in there life. Smoking may cause heart disease. Heart disease will also decrease your life span. Smoking also has side effects. Smoking can give you wrinkles Even if you’re still young. You will also have trouble speaking .some people have had to get a device put into their throats just to speak. And having the device in your throat will mean you have to wash it every day. You’ll also have a bad odor from your breath to your cloth. That could affect other non-smokers. Smoking is also one of the many items that get littered on the ground. It’s also a big waste of money. It’s like asking someone to take your life and shorten it for five dollars. About 19.8 percent of U.S. adults -- 43.4 million people -- were smokers in 2007. Many of them have died 13 to 14 years earlier than they would of if they didn’t smoke.so my word to you is don’t smoke.
@RainbowBrony555
This is an great essay! I did a similar one but on Caffeine
cool. but you really think i did good?
Yes, It's great! :)
thanks.
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its great keep up the great work
yeah, i really like it to.
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