Question

a poem i wrote....
when you feel lost and out of control,
with nowhere else to turn.
just know my heart will be on patrol,
guarding yours from them.
i can understand you want to leave,
dont want to deal with the pain.
but my love, you better believe,
ill be here and never gone again.
i know i tried to run,
that was wrong of me to do.
i only have one more thing to say,
and thats i love you.

Answer 1

Very beautiful poem. :) Only recommendation would be to perhaps use capital letters the the start of each line and examine punctuation.

Answer 2

thanks

Answer 3

I agree with the capitalization and the punctuation, but this is otherwise a really great poem. I really loved it.
@JackofallTradez

Answer 4

OMG, such a beautiful and heart-felt poem! The emotion portrayed in these words are easily felt and held. I greatly enjoyed this poem X3
Thank you, @leahhhmorgannn ^_^

Answer 5

thank you so much i worked really hard on this XD

Answer 6

awww that was beautiful

Answer 7

thank you! ive never really had anyone like my poetry before! <3 love you all!

Answer 8

It was amazing! I truly loved it! You are very talented... Keep doing what you do and you'll go really far in life.

Answer 9

thank chu <3

Answer 10

beautiful i loved it

Answer 11

dem poetry skillz doe amazing man

Answer 12

I agree nice poem. Keep up the good work :)

Answer 13

this is beautiful, indeed

Answer 14

thank you

Answer 15

6 days ago mmm.. and i had no idea about it

Answer 16

very poetic are you a writer

Answer 17

yes i am but no one really reads my stuff because most of it is morbid...