Question

Tell me if this is great
I haven written a poem and a best friend of mine whose name should not be mentioned is a really a supportive friend who inspired me to write this sad poem after she told me her sad young story who she ended up crying for him with a broken heart.
This poem is titled: Something I Wished For
[poem will be posted belowed]

Answer 1

Something I Wish For
I always wished for a gentle hug,
Whenever I was scared or I cried from loneliness.
Was that too hard to do?
To show you love me and I deserved trustworthy from you,
This was something I had wished for from you.

I wished for you to say my name at least once,
Say, “I LOVE YOU” to show you loved me,
Being without you is very hard,
I never thought I would never stop thinking about you,
You and me could have have our hearts together,
I knew you perfectly,
But you never seem too noticed what I wished for,

My dreams were with you,
But you destroyed them,
Piece by piece my heart went repairing,
All I wanted was to get you part of my heart,
But never to be apart.
You ruined that something I wished for.

Answer 2

@radar @HelpBlahBlahBlah @sleepyjess @Joel_the_boss @Annа @HaileyD @haleyelizabeth2017 @selena44 @Buttercup214 @HaileyD @AdamK

Answer 3

@HaileyD @gelow @chosenmatt @sweetburger @shifuyanli @DelTa-_-LeGEnD @dan815 @sammixboo @bohotness @background43 @winsteria @andreacastillol @Non_girly_girl @Nnesha

Answer 4

thats a really good poem lizz123

Answer 5

awesomee <3 i love it!

Answer 6

Amazing poem

Answer 7

Thanks @HelpBlahBlahBlah @selena44 @andreacastillol

Answer 8

Np :)

Answer 9

Np :)

Answer 10

I love it! @KevinM.Williams159

Answer 11

Kevin will probably like it too he is a grammar nazi though

Answer 12

thanks @Non_girly_girl

Answer 13

I like that :)

Answer 14

thanks @HaileyD

Answer 15

Welcome