I wrote an essay over the "Irony of War" for the novel "All Quiet on the Western Front". I was wondering if some can check it for grammar mistakes, punctuation, etc...

*Make the correction in highlighter on the paper and re-attach it in the comment section*

*Note: The information like this: (Pupp, Kolby). are my citations and information came from there but if something doesn't sound right with the source information, please make the highliation and explain what's wrong with it or any changes to it.

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I wrote an essay over the "Irony of War" for the novel "All Quiet on the Western Front". I was wondering if some can check it for grammar mistakes, punctuation, etc... 

*Make the correction in highlighter on the paper and re-attach it in the comment section*

*Note: The information like this: (Pupp, Kolby). are my citations and information came from there but if something doesn't sound right with the source information, please make the highliation and explain what's wrong with it or any changes to it.

firejay5 · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

NOT BAD! Sorta love it but needs some work to it. Such as more advanced and intense words.

firejay5 · Answer

@DatChinookGuy thank you so much for your feedback it has helped me so much and I have turned in the paper already.