Question

Can anybody tell me do this sound good

Answer 1

what is the last sentence in the 4th paragraph?

Answer 2

It only says Mothers and Fathers.And continues to the next Paragraph.

Answer 3

Hello?

Answer 4

I am here

Answer 5

Umm, and I think the paragraphs are too short;it needs to have a little more detail.Sorry if I sound mean i'm just saying what I think.

Answer 6

Paragraphs are suppoused to be 5-9 sentences long.

Answer 7

And you should keep your sentences in line and organized.

Answer 8

Bye