I'm writing this poem

For a very special lady,

Always and forever,

She'll always be my baby

I dream of holding her,

In my arms so tight,

If loving her is wrong,

Then I don't wanna be right.

I dream of kissing her,

Her lips so sweet

She's so beautiful,

She knocks me off my feet.

The way I feel about her,

Words can't express,

Through good times and bad,

I won't love her any less

This special lady means so much to me,

She goes by the most beautiful name -Its this a good poem for her ???

Question

I'm writing this poem

For a very special lady,

Always and forever,

She'll always be my baby

I dream of holding her,

In my arms so tight,

If loving her is wrong,

Then I don't wanna be right.

I dream of kissing her,

Her lips so sweet

She's so beautiful,

She knocks me off my feet.

The way I feel about her,

Words can't express,

Through good times and bad,

I won't love her any less

This special lady means so much to me,

She goes by the most beautiful name -Its this a good poem for her ???

anonymous · Answer

Sounds pretty good.

anonymous · Answer

Did you ever think about being a poet?

anonymous · Answer

@kendji123 what a beautiful poem! i know she'll love it. just one thing. so, "She goes by the most beautiful name" that's the last sentence, right? i might change it  a little so the last word rhymes with "me". other than that, AWESOME! :D

anonymous · Answer

Agreed.

fallenangelorchid · Answer

Nice o-o

anonymous · Answer

TOTAL PERFECTION!!! I am positive that she will ADORE this poem...