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OpenStudy (theraggedydoctor):

I wrote something..

OpenStudy (theraggedydoctor):

I wanna run away But only with my bae So until that day My hopes won't go away

OpenStudy (anonymous):

*claps viciously* amazing ~cries~ MASTERPIECE

OpenStudy (theraggedydoctor):

Why thank you. I just came up with it.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

amazing XD

OpenStudy (inowalst):

Bae. c: That was bootiful and perfect.. like you. <3

OpenStudy (theraggedydoctor):

I know I am. c: <3 Talking to myself..

OpenStudy (theraggedydoctor):

xD It was indeed a masterpiece, bae.

OpenStudy (theraggedydoctor):

AND I AM NOT BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT.

OpenStudy (leonardo0430):

2perfect4me #would read again 10/10 ign

OpenStudy (cookiemonster2412):

So beautiful :') AND YES YOU ARE PERFECT!!!!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

this poem should get more recognition...awesome job!!

OpenStudy (anonymous):

really good. great job.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

pretty good... :D

OpenStudy (callmekiki):

Cute. :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

x) Taken loved it.

OpenStudy (teresar7):

that is great!

OpenStudy (baby_bear69):

DAT WAS BOOTYFUL *wipes tear away*

OpenStudy (samsungfanboy):

Something amazing is one small piece

OpenStudy (theraggedydoctor):

You guys... it's just something that came to mind. You don't have to freak out about it xD

OpenStudy (teddyiswatshecallsme):

._.

OpenStudy (callmekiki):

Adorable, eh? :)

OpenStudy (teddyiswatshecallsme):

No comment.

OpenStudy (teddyiswatshecallsme):

Wot?

OpenStudy (theraggedydoctor):

You don't have to comment if you don't want to. Simple as that.

OpenStudy (teddyiswatshecallsme):

I know, Albert Einstein.

OpenStudy (anonymous):

its very short but i think it carries alot of meaning. I would have liked to have seen it longer with some metaphors. still it was very good

OpenStudy (anonymous):

also you wrote this about a month ago i would love to read something newer

OpenStudy (horsegirl27):

this is really cool. I'm surprised at how good, and meaningful this actually is, as it is so short. But it is really great. And it's cute :)

OpenStudy (anonymous):

This was really cute but not gonna lie I kinda feel like the word bae ruined it.

OpenStudy (theraggedydoctor):

So? It was meant to have that word in it.. If you don't like it, too bad.

OpenStudy (babynini):

oh. my. gosh. I can't tell if this is for real or not xD I don't want to be rude but..ee haha

OpenStudy (anonymous):

I didn't say it wasn't meant to have that word in it. I was just saying if you want it to be more meaningful then the word bae... which means s*h*i*t* in danish.... totally makes it sound like a joke.

OpenStudy (horsegirl27):

@im_no_smarty_pants there was no need to swear. Even with stars in between each letter, you're still swearing. And it was completely unnecessary to use that language when there are many other word options.

OpenStudy (theraggedydoctor):

:| Thank you.

OpenStudy (horsegirl27):

In this case, it was actually a good use of bae, and it made the poem good.

OpenStudy (theraggedydoctor):

@Babynini It's totally real. And it'll happen. c: As for @im_no_smarty_pants , you didn't have to say that..

OpenStudy (horsegirl27):

(and I normally hate the word bae. But it's usage here was cute)

OpenStudy (theraggedydoctor):

Thanks again. @horsegirl27 c:

OpenStudy (horsegirl27):

you're very welcome c:

OpenStudy (anonymous):

sorry... I'll rephrase that. bae means poop in danish. better? literally the same thing. So.... with that said. you want to run away with your poop? XD

OpenStudy (horsegirl27):

There, you used a more appropriate word.

OpenStudy (horsegirl27):

Anyway, seeing as it's used as slang for baby, it's fine

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