I wrote an essay over the "Archduke Franz Ferdinand" for a final project for English. I was wondering if someone can check it for grammar mistakes, punctuation, etc...

*Make the correction in highlighter or add comments on the paper and re-attach it in the comment section*

*Note: The information like this: ex: ("Franz Ferdinand"). are my citations and information came from there but if something doesn't sound right with the source information, please make the highliation or comment and explain what's wrong with it or any changes to it.

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I wrote an essay over the "Archduke Franz Ferdinand" for a final project for English. I was wondering if someone can check it for grammar mistakes, punctuation, etc... 

*Make the correction in highlighter or add comments on the paper and re-attach it in the comment section*
 
*Note: The information like this: ex: ("Franz Ferdinand"). are my citations and information came from there but if something doesn't sound right with the source information, please make the highliation or comment and explain what's wrong with it or any changes to it.

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