Question

Found you.

Answer 1

When I saw you I was pretty much a stalker
you would stay away from crowds
you weren't much of a talker
Straight A student and quiet as hell
if you were to be crying, no one could tell
You walk home, sometimes catching a ride from you mother
getting home you break down in tears, hugging each other
Coming back to school you hold your chin high
no one could tell, your're father just died
Deciding to show myself, I question whats wrong
you silently sob, whispering 'he's gone.'
I don't know what I felt for you
but I'm hoping you're feeling it too
I hope to make you smile and fell better
than when I found you.

Answer 2

*feel. Sorry o-o

Answer 3

I love it!!! To a frightening degree of accuracy, that captures the behaviors of someone I know quite well.

Answer 4

Perhaps frightening is not the best word. Uncanny is more appropriate.

Answer 5

@teresar7 @xavierbo2 @musicmouse @leonardo0430 @logan420 @Majesty69.
Thanks! @geneticrockhopper247

Answer 6

*You're. o-o

Answer 7

best poem i ever read # would read again 10/10 ign

Answer 8

Thanks x'D

Answer 9

love it

Answer 10

Thanks :D

Answer 11

yea best poam

Answer 12

xD Thanks

Answer 13

speechless!!!

Answer 14

:D

Answer 15

I hope this isn't abrupt,
but your poem really sucks,
It's time to go outside and play,
Not just sit on OpenStudy all day. :')

Answer 16

(Just kidding it doesn't suck nice job) ;)

Answer 17

Lol thanks xD

Answer 18

@MilkNCookies your poem is lovely.

Answer 19

wow this is amazing... (probs wont see my comment but oh well) XD

Answer 20

Your poem is amazing! I love it! @fallenangelorchid

Answer 21

Thanks :D

Answer 22

This is so beautiful, to me. Honestly, this poem could exactly describe the last two years I've had because I lost my dad November of 2013.

Beautiful, beautiful job. I love it so much.

One note: "your're father" should just be "your father" :)

@JackofallTradez

Answer 23

Thanks for the tip :D

Answer 24

DOOD. It's incredible! :O

Answer 25

:D Thanks

Answer 26

@<3teddybearhugs<3

Answer 27

:O this is amazing Logan. very nicely done. Seriously i will take you up on those writing lessonsxD

Answer 28

xD Lol thanks

Answer 29

I cant write like that without thinking of someone or like something XD im not THAT gifted

Answer 30

It made me cry!! So beautiful!!

Answer 31

Love the poem fallen

Answer 32

@fallenangelorchid.... breathe taking:) keep writing you have a future;)

Answer 33

breath*

Answer 34

Thanks :D

Answer 35

No problamo... how long did this take you to write

Answer 36

About six minutes o-o

Answer 37

:O im jealous;) XD

Answer 38

x'D

Answer 39

Maybe you can teach me one day XD
Im not nearly as good as you

Answer 40

Sure thing xP

Answer 41

Fabulous...:D