i need to fix this

According to my parents, a questionable trend is kids with body piercing.

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i need to fix this

According to my parents, a questionable trend is kids with body piercing.

anonymous · Answer

Do you want to rephrase the sentence or just fix the grammar?

anonymous · Answer

just fix

january123 · Answer

Okay...so, do you have any idea of how you can fix it or see a mistake?

anonymous · Answer

no i dont

anonymous · Answer

i am really bad at English

january123 · Answer

Me neither  for the forst part...but if there wasn't a mistake...why woukd this be a question...so try again

anonymous · Answer

I would say just remove "kids with" or change it to "kids having..."

because kids with sounds wrong to me.

anonymous · Answer

i am still lost

anonymous · Answer

May I ask what this is for?

anonymous · Answer

Instead of: "According to my parents, a questionable trend is kids with body piercing."

It can be:  

"According to my parents, a questionable trend is body piercing."

or 

 "According to my parents, a questionable trend is kids having body piercings."

anonymous · Answer

is was the frist one 
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