Question

Read the sentence and answer the question that follows:

In the event that you spy a tornado, go and seek shelter in a dark room that has no windows.

Which statement best describes how this sentence can be made more concise. (10 points)

It has a phrase that can be converted to reduce wordiness.
It has a modifier that may be eliminated because it does not add any meaning.
It has a redundant phrase that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.
It has a redundant pair that may be revised to eliminate repetitiveness.

Answer 1

I think A