I'm writing this poem

For a very special lady,

Always and forever,

She'll always be my baby

I dream of holding her,

In my arms so tight,

If loving her is wrong,

Then I don't wanna be right.

I dream of kissing her,

Her lips so sweet

She's so beautiful,

She knocks me off my feet.

The way I feel about her,

Words can't express,

Through good times and bad,

I won't love her any less

This special lady means so much to me,

She goes by the most beautiful name -Its this a good poem for her ???

Question

I'm writing this poem

For a very special lady,

Always and forever,

She'll always be my baby

I dream of holding her,

In my arms so tight,

If loving her is wrong,

Then I don't wanna be right.

I dream of kissing her,

Her lips so sweet

She's so beautiful,

She knocks me off my feet.

The way I feel about her,

Words can't express,

Through good times and bad,

I won't love her any less

This special lady means so much to me,

She goes by the most beautiful name -Its this a good poem for her ???

athenawolf · Answer

I think that's a lovely poem!
If you took out "Then" from "Then I don't wanna be right" it might work better for flow, other than that, I can't see anything that doesn't work. Well done!

anonymous · Answer

Thanks I made this poem because i really love someone from openstudy @AthenaWolf

athenawolf · Answer

Good luck!

anonymous · Answer

Thanks

anonymous · Answer

Nice poem bro. You'll surely win her

anonymous · Answer

Oh my gosh. what a great poem...She'll LOVE it

<3meggann<3 · Answer

I think its a bit simple minded, but if she likes you, she'll like the poem even if it really sucks.