Question

Please give your honest opinion!

Poem is in the comments...

Answer 1

I'm burning on the insides
I can feel it as if it was pushing itself against me
Pushing me against a wall

Anger
Flowing through my veins

Adrenalin
Ruining whatever my mind was working on

I could break something

Anything would be fine
Everything would be better

But before I realize what I was doing,
It was all a lie

Adrenaline and anger were filling up my brain with stories

They wanted to hurt me

They got what they worked for

They made me believe that if I did what they asked, they'd go away and it would all be better

And they did
They disappeared

But were replaced by pain and grief

Not just physical, but emotional too

I felt stupid

Because I actually let anger get the best of me
Because I really thought that by believing him, I'd find peace
Because I can never learn the lesson

And then there's grief

Because I still never got what I wanted
Because I can't stop thinking about it
Because as stubborn as I'll ever be,
I can't change my mind and forget about it.

I'm cold

Water doesn't seem to stop flowing from my eyes
It feels as if I was swallowing a cold metal bullet
It ending in my stomach like an ice grenade,
Blowing up my insides and freezing whatever is left behind

I cannot bare with it anymore,
But I can't do anything about it

After all,
What is left of me?

It would never be enough to handle anything

How could I ever not feel?

We all know the answer

Answer 2

wow

Answer 3

This is yours?

Answer 4

yeah

Answer 5

You like?

Answer 6

I love this!

Answer 7

Thank you @AuthorGuy17 ^^

Answer 8

@ispike

Answer 9

@ispike @geneticrockhopper247 , what do you think?

Answer 10

I've always been of the opinion that anger and adrenaline are the enemies of logical and reason. Thanks for proving me right :) I really do like this, though. It feels like a chronological expression of rage, if that makes any sense at all.

Answer 11

It does make sense to me, thank you @geneticrockhopper247 :)

Answer 12

Not a problem :). Please tag me if you write anything else. I'd love to read more.

Answer 13

Definitely will :)

Answer 14

That was amazing!! I really like it!!

Answer 15

Thanks! ^^

Answer 16

Pi love it...i can imagine and feel the emotion and it all right now...bottomline...i love this song

Answer 17

great outstanding amazing....keep up the good work.


~also fans and medals are appericated~

Answer 18

@Blonde_Gangsta what do you think?

Answer 19

*DIES* *HUGS YOU* IT SO WONDERFUL SO SAD I LOVE IT

Answer 20

@Capnkookcx

Answer 21

@barbdewysveck1

Answer 22

@DominantVampire

Answer 23

its good indeed

Answer 24

Thanks DominantVampire! :D

Answer 25

Oh My Gosh! That is an amazing poem. I've never seen anything like it. I love it!

Answer 26

I think it does show true emotion but it is..to put it lightly, slightly depressing.

Answer 27

this poem is beautifully written

Answer 28

Thank you @madhu.mukherjee.946 n_n

Answer 29

@BonnieB. your always welcome....and i'll be looking forward for some nice poem of yours .whenever you write poems please do tag me....:)