Question

There have been many studies about the effect too much television has on children and whether it is harmful or beneficial.

The best way to improve this thesis is to
include the topic being discussed.
clearly take a side.
express a viewpoint.
cite the source of the study.

Answer 1

@shifuyanli

Answer 2

@whpalmer4

Answer 3

Express your own viewpoint. By doing this, you are able to provide facts and evidence to help and strengthen your opinion.

Answer 4

thanks!!!!

Answer 5

i got it wrong??

Answer 6

Then it's A I suppose. What class is this for?

Answer 7

Exploring Argument