Question

Could anyone help me with my World War one essay in private? I already did it but my teacher told me I needed more stuff on it..

Answer 1

i could try to help you out?

Answer 2

@nessachole02 Sure I dont mind :]

Answer 3

so its just about World War 1 in general or is there like any specific topic with in it you're talking about?

Answer 4

So this is what he wanted us to do;

We have studied World War One by first going over the Causes of the War. Next we talked about the battles and how the war was fought. Last we talked about Wilson's 14 Points and the Treaty of Versailles. The war was very complex and varied. But it did have a beginning, middle, and end. It will be your job to pick one major theme or concept in the war and trace it from beginning to end. You may use your notebooks and any handouts we read in class to include examples and quotes for the essay. Make sure your analysis is complete and refer to the rubric to make sure you are turning in a completed essay.

Example: Pick something that happened at the beginning of the war, how did this concept/theme affect the fighting of the battles, lastly, how was it included into the Treaty of Versailles or Wilson's 14 Points Speech?

What was the most important event that happened during World War One? How did this event affect the beginning, fighting, and end of the war? Write an essay in which you explain this theme.

Answer 5

Honestly the only response or comment he made was to add quotes..

Answer 6

But I don't know where or what to quote

Answer 7

My "Essay" lol