Question

falling alone...
i was falling down for you
are you falling for me too?
i know i did some wrong...
but you make me want to belong...
i need this in my life.
cause it just doesnt feel right
i need this in my life
because you are my light.
i know i made you dim
i know i make life grim
but you know i have to try...
i know sometimes i lie
but im in love with you
and this much is true
im never letting go of you..

Answer 1

good!

Answer 2

that's awesome i like the use of ellipses!!!

Answer 3

thanks :)

Answer 4

@logan420 @DominantVampire @timo86m

Answer 5

its amazing

Answer 6

thanks :3

Answer 7

Wow, impressive! I love it =)

Answer 8

astounding.

Answer 9

thank you very much i enjoy the feedback...

Answer 10

@DominantVampire thank you especially for your support and feedback it means alot

Answer 11

_smiles_ i'd love to read more of your work.

Answer 12

*grins* then i shall post more often

Answer 13

_chuckles_ that'd be nice

Answer 14

but i want you to write one, only for me _smirks_

Answer 15

*laughs* it is written

Answer 16

U R never alone tho :)

Answer 17

thank i know timo :3