Question

So I have a poem I'd like to share, but I'm new to OpenStudy, so I'm kinda nervous. But I'll do it anyway.

Answer 1

We're burning up inside.
Clinging onto each others'
tragedies,
apologizing to each other
for what the world
has decided to throw
at our young
bodies and
minds.
The incidents of mankind,
happening to the youth who
never
thought
of
this
when playing with their
Barbie dolls.
Emotions.
Ruining our eyesights,
clouding us from seeing the
truth.
We were happy once.
Was it today,
or last year?
How do we know,
with our minds being twisted;
the world is
vomiting words and images
at us.
We lose our sense of love
faster than we can say
"virginity,"
cuz that's normal now;
running around
like lost chickens
with their heads cut off.
Only a few survive the
slaughterhouse.
So much for our stories
being told;
so much for anonymity,
not a privilege we have
anymore.
Our throats are raw
from keeping in our thoughts.
Our tongues burn
from the toothpaste-mint words
we spit at the world.
Emotions.
They're being
bottled
up
inside.
On accident?
Perhaps.
Crazy is in right now,
and boy,
we love to follow that fad.
It's better than eating our own hearts out.
...Right?

Answer 2

omg this is amazing and if you're interested I have a few poems of my own on my profile page

Answer 3

omg this is one of the best poems i have ever read. I love reading and writing about perspective. This is so touching and just flat out amazing. I would love to hear more please tag me in any of your writings. I am absolutely amazed. I have no critics which is really rare for me. This is absolutely perfection

Answer 4

Gr8 poem

Answer 5

i have to agree with @ispike thats amazing i love @ispike ones but yours have something but also i dont like reading long stuff so i didnt finish because im soon to be a human calculator and a human writer helper so im helping lots of people medals are apperciated @emblebee