Question

Which revision best corrects the errors in the given sentence?

There are certain things about winter for instance, hot soup and the first snowfall that I always enjoy.

A.
There are certain things about winter: for instance, hot soup and the first snowfall—that I always enjoy.

B.
There are certain things about winter: for instance, hot soup and the first snowfall that I always enjoy.

C.
There are certain things about winter—for instance, hot soup and the first snowfall—that I always enjoy.

Answer 1

Elimination?

Answer 2

I dun think it's C. Has to be either A or B.

Answer 3

B is correct because colons are best used to separate if u were saying something

Answer 4

I'm going with what makes the most sense, and I believe that it isn't b.

Answer 5

I was leaning toward A also...

Answer 6

no no no its B

Answer 7

Prove it. Really not trying to be mean here, but I can't see ho it would be b.

Answer 8

*how

Answer 9

because you need colons when explain ex* My three best friends are:Mary, Bob, John

Answer 10

get it now??

Answer 11

You say It's B... Are the dashes and the colon in the right place? Does the sentence make sense to you? It's not Just the colon that you need to look at, It's the dash, Also. Mot trying to be mean x-x

Answer 12

Yes. Thank you