Question

down in a hole...
a poem i wrote

Answer 1

he said he loved me
he said he cared
he said he needed me
although he never dared

he hit me in the gut
slapped my face
left me with a black eye
in his place

now im down in a hole
no way out
no way up
no matter how i shout

Answer 2

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Answer 3

@Alucard_Hellsing feedback?

Answer 4

Omg, that's so perfect and sad.

Answer 5

thank you for the feed back :3

Answer 6

very good, indeed

Answer 7

the emotional scars from my last love are worse than the dark bruises i inflicted on myself.