You try not to go back
But everything thing you see, everything you do
Pushes you to crack
They say you can’t feel it
But you just can’t conceal it
As you take your last breath
It all ends
just- like- that-

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You try not to go back
But everything thing you see, everything you do
Pushes you to crack 
They say you can’t feel it
But you just can’t conceal it
As you take your last breath
It all ends 
just- like- that-

anonymous · Answer

The meaning of my poem is unknown, even to me the person who wrote it. I just write what comes to mind. If you can figure out what I mean, let me know because I am lost.
Thanks :)

geneticrockhopper247 · Answer

It seems to be an inner struggle, of sorts. No matter what you say, no matter what you think, no matter what you do, life is just pushing you to the edge of breaking. 

"This is the way the world ends/not with a bang, but with a whimper." -TS Eliot "The Hollow Men"

That's my interpretation of it, anyway.

anonymous · Answer

That is my favorite quote of ALL TIME lol :D

anonymous · Answer

i do that too, just write what comes to mind and have no idea of the meaning. we can help each other out! :)

the first three lines seem indicative of PTSD, and flashbacks, talking about a trigger (or it could just be me lol) 
next couple lines are your feelings not being validated
and then, death

not the happiest but  VERY well written. I love it

anonymous · Answer

Awww... Thank you guys for your sweet comments :)

geneticrockhopper247 · Answer

Haha, it's one of mine, too.

anonymous · Answer

:)

anonymous · Answer

Btw
@geneticrockhopper247  & @jessmitz  
Feel free to tag anyone :)

anonymous · Answer

your super pretty and can write.. your a double threat;)

anonymous · Answer

haha thanks

anonymous · Answer

;)