Question

criticism? also if I tagged you and you don't want to be tagged in the future just comment that. Or if you were not tagged and want to be added to my list for the future, mention that too. thanks guys! :)

Answer 1

you are like a puzzle
with only half the pieces.
musical chairs lacking music.
or four square without a ball.
a game of connect the dots
that only forms scribbles.
monopoly without the money.
or chess without a king.
simon says but missing simon.
or jenga made of glass.
you're a child's favorite story
without the happy ending.
hide and seek without a seeker.
or scrabble without vowels.
i guess what im trying to say is
i know we will never win the game
but
i cant make myself stop trying
or hoping that somehow
we might

Answer 2

@redeemed1312 @ispike @PoetryPrincess @leahhhmorgannn @k_lynn @KyoshiKitty @horsegirl27 @demonchild99 @geneticrockhopper247 @77777jeannie77777 @KyanTheDoodle

Answer 3

this is really good. Very interesting. It makes me think and i love how you compare him to games that are missing the most important pieces. This is very well written. It gets you thinking and it has a sweet yet sad ending

Answer 4

@ispike thank you. that was my point, to use games that are missing pieces that are necessary, to show that there is no chance of it ever working, but the incessant need/hope that it will. this one is really personal. :)

Answer 5

you can tell that its close to you and the best types of poetry makes you feel vulnerable. You did a great job please keep it up and posting. r u by chance on writers cafe or wattpad. I think you would defiantly like those sites

Answer 6

im not. I will go check them out. what is your name on there so I can find you?

Answer 7

Noting Society

Answer 8

cool. I shall find you! lol >:l

Answer 9

yea

Answer 10

p.s i like writers cafe way better but its a little confusin at first

Answer 11

hmmm, i like this one :3
i like the feeling that it conveys~

Answer 12

oh, and i totally don't mind getting tagged in the future, i enjoy looking at these poems =^.^=

Answer 13

cool. thanks @KyoshiKitty

Answer 14

Nicely done! I love the theme you had going!
Thanks for tagging meh

Answer 15

Wow, I love this so much! The Jenga reference and the mention of the children's story was absolutely amazing!

Answer 16

But, please keep tagging me. I love these.

Answer 17

thanks @geneticrockhopper247 @redeemed1312 :)

Answer 18

I LOVE this! Please tag me in the future :)

Answer 19

totally! thanks @~*Ashtyn*~