Question

A poem by me called Crazy. I hope y'all enjoy it! Any thoughts feel free to share =)

Answer 1

Lying right here every night,

Wishing I could sleep for once,

I close my eyes and see your smile,

Like you’re there in front of me,

Why is my memory so good?

For once I wish it weren’t,

Because every time I stop to think,

I remember something else about you,

Why am I obsessed with you?

Do you think of me this much?

I’m not just saying this,

I can really picture your face,

All the time,

Your smile when we’re texting,

It’s crazy,

I’m crazy,

I know that much,

Oh it’s nothing,

Just me,

Yup,

That must be it,

I’m not surprised,

I'm just crazy,

About you <3

Answer 2

and please feel free to tag anyone =)

Answer 3

@GracieBugg @just_one_last_goodbye @Legends @jabez177

Answer 4

If I had people to tag I would but @fallenangelorchid should be tagged lol I like it

Answer 5

dang <3 I really love this nice job way better then elfy's ;)

Answer 6

lol thx Gracie =)

Answer 7

lol aww thx Dej! =)

Answer 8

@isry98 @red_x

Answer 9

man this is really good i love this :)

Answer 10

lol thx =)

Answer 11

Iris, I feel hurt. xD @dejmccray

Answer 12

aw elfy don't we already know its true XD @fallenangelorchid

Answer 13

lol

Answer 14

I surrender xD

Answer 15

lol wow Logan =)

@ispike

Answer 16

I really like it I do suggest trying to write a similar poem with a similar theme and try to say more with less words. In every workshop I've ever done they've always said that when writing especially poetry every word should have at least three meanings. I think this is something u should play with and work on. Also I would play around with metaphors. In this poem I wish there was a little more showing rather than telling. U have a great voice please keep writing and thanks for taggin me I love to read poems from great writers

Answer 17

i love it

Answer 18

lol thx Sean =)