Question

Okay so this poem is about a storm....
This poem is probably the worst poem I have done in years- Wait… What about that one… *mumbles* first grade *mumbles* kitties & bingo- *stops the shenanigans* ANYWAYS lol I still hope you like it!
Let me know by giving me a rating:

5= BEST POEM EVA!!!
4= I LOVE IT!!!
3= Wow this is good!
2= It’s nice
1= Eh… Erm… Uh… It’s Uh…

And If you have been tagged I didn’t want to be or you want to be tagged in the future let me know ;) (Sorry @jessmitz I am TOTALLY stealing your idea haha)
Enjoy!
~Ashtyn

Answer 1

Here ya go! :)

Answer 2

Also if you have missed my first poem here it is :)

Answer 3

@jessmitz
@geneticrockhopper247
@sugarplum15
@ispike
@<3teddybearhugs<3
@xo.minnie.xox
@HazelLuv99
@horsegirl27

Answer 4

5 thts a rlly good poem

Answer 5

3 :)

Answer 6

I'd give it a 3 or 4. You have got some really raw, tangible feeling going on in this poem, so it's pretty good. It's not the best poem that I've ever read, but it's really great for a newer writer.

Answer 7

5!!!! :DDD

Answer 8

Thanks :) I and ik @geneticrockhopper247 It is DEFINITIVELY NOT the best poem ANYONE has read haha

Answer 9

Ummm that "I" is not supposed to be there XD lol

Answer 10

5!!

Answer 11

The poem is really nice. It kept me interested while reading it. It's certainly very good for a new writer.

Answer 12

Thank you :) @AliceCullen & @confluxepic

Answer 13

No problem. @~*Ashtyn*~

Answer 14

A 5, DEFINATLY A 5!! You've done it again, @~*Ashtyn*~ Editor.

Answer 15

Haha Thanks, Have you posted anything new yet besides the baby poem (which I still haven't read or edited yet CX) ?...

Answer 16

Uhhh...IS THAT JUSTIN BEBIER?! Gotta go! Lol, no not yet.

Answer 17

Your crazy but I still luv ya! ;) lol

Answer 18

Aww your too kind! @~*Ashtyn*~

Answer 19

ikr haha XD

Answer 20

5.

Answer 21

indeed it is good

Answer 22

thx @DominantVampire

Answer 23

1. Personally, I don't think its good, assuming you're not in elementary school, this could have been written way better.
I get where you're coming from with the topic. I'm really picky about poems though, very rarely I read one that I like. I don't know you but from what I've seen from you I think you could write something much much better.

Answer 24

^ Roasted

Answer 25

im not roasting anyone, she wants honest opinions (I assume) and should learn that criticism isn't a bad thing, especially when you want to improve your writing, if anything its necessary.

Answer 26

I won't take any criticism from someone that types like a fifth grader, but I guess that's just me.

Answer 27

#Pleaseteachmehowtoenrish.