criticism?

Question

criticism?

anonymous · Answer

out of all the flowers in the garden
you chose me
plucked me from the soil
when I had hardly sprouted
you saw something in me
and i still don't know what it was

i’m just sorry i never met your expectations
i couldn't even bloom correctly
i failed you
and made you regret ever picking the plant
that was never truly meant to be seen

but please
don’t blame yourself
for my withered petals
i was merely a convincing duplicate of the real flowers
my disguise was so blinding 
you couldn't see the truth

that i am actually a weed

anonymous · Answer

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anonymous · Answer

love it

anonymous · Answer

I have never seen a poem like this one... I love it! <3 Good Job! :)

horsegirl27 · Answer

Wow this poem is so creative and so good!! I love it!!!!!!

redeemed1312 · Answer

Da*mnnnnnnnnn
Your talented! Keep me updated please?

yousir · Answer

WONDERFUL WRITING

anonymous · Answer

Very lovely poem! 
But theres an extra word, you can remove "just" from in between "I'm just sorry"
I love how you finished it very nice!

pinkcandyrosez882 · Answer

Great job! :)

geneticrockhopper247 · Answer

The analogy you maintain throughout the poem is amazing! Well done!