Who's good with writing imagery?
Oh, I am! Need help?
I meant... I like writing imagery... ^.^
Yes, I absolutely suck at doing it, I understand how and everything but I'm not good at it.
4. Write a paragraph that discusses going on a hike in the mountains. Please include at least two types of imagery in the paragraph. Highlight or underline the imagery, and make sure to also state in a few sentences after the paragraph: 1) Which types of imagery did you use (ex: Touch, Hearing, etc.), and 2) How does the imagery impact your paragraph?
MY OWN EXAMPLE OF IMAGERY: The sun shone bright and hot as I walked outside of my small cottage. The smell of pine trees and hot grass arose in the air. It was a hot day, but the birds sung their cheerful songs. The grass and flowers didn't sway a single inch as the wind blew with hardly a puff of air. You do have an idea of what you can do now, don't you?
Im pretty sure you were supposed write about hiking a mountain ..
@TinyLittleHelper
I know, but I want to make sure you don't copy my work or something.
Today I woke up watching the beautiful sunrise. It will be a glorious day for hiking in the mountains. As I get dressed I see that the sun is rising higher and higher by the second. I cannot wait to start the wonderful day with a hike. I am now ready to begin hiking the mighty and great mountains.
There is paragraph one
Dont copy my work
please
I will right a different one I thought it said write a four paragraph story about hiking the mountains
Lol, @mjperez18 don't worry sweetie there's no need.
I already did the work I was just about to close the question.
I have to go; time to study JAVA programming. Bye!
As I hike in the mountains I see the beautiful sun glowing at its brightest in the middle of the wonderful day. The bold smell of the pine trees as I hike bring a familiar memory of the winter. I can just taste the richness of the fresh mountain air as I hike. I can hear the birds singing their beautiful songs, the birds filling their chests with air prepared to sing out another verse. I can feel the wind trying to bring me back down to the ground as I hike knowing that, that is where I belong.
@Alisha007 did that help? please give me a medal
to bring me back down to the ground as I hike knowing that, that is where I belong.
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