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Standing in the rain then there you came you gave me sunshine and took the storm away i fell in love and dont mistake it i fell hard you'd help me up then again i would start with you its difficult to resist but whispering in my ear "its just one more night it will be alright" but if i fall one more time im sure i will break being with you puts my heart at stake but being the gullible person i am i will trust you again and again
until one day i will permanently stumble but this time i cant recover this fumble then here i am crying in the rain then there you came
you gave me my storm and

Answer 1

took my sunshine away

Answer 2

its very good, indeed,

Answer 3

@DarkMoonZ @just_one_last_goodbye @YOUNGSUPERMAN @fallenangelorchid @Legends @sammixboo @xo.minnie.xox @TheGaMer007 @Awolflover1 @DominantVampire @Daltonw @JackofallTradez @Teddyiswatshecallsme @MattAlva98 @mastermindkakashi

Answer 4

oh, the tagging.

Answer 5

yeaXD

Answer 6

not finished? but awesome :)

Answer 7

Really good, boo. :D I like it. :3

Answer 8

that is so awesome!!!! very nice job!!! i think you did wonderful!!! keep up the great work!! XD. I am giving you a medal!!!

Answer 9

Wow
Appart from some grammar issues, this radiates the emotion of falling for someone and losing that love. It also helps that it's raining here right now.
Great work

Answer 10

thanks:DD and i just wrote it so yeah it might need some tweaks;)

Answer 11

Trin that was amazing :D Good job!!!!!

Answer 12

fanks

Answer 13

Your whalecom

Answer 14

if you ever finish it please send a copy!!!! XD i would love to hear it!! thanks for showing me!! XD

Answer 15

lolXD where are you people getting that i didnt finish it fromXDD its finished it just needs some editing like jack said.. grammar and shtuffs

Answer 16

@Legends your so coral

Answer 17

wait you have music for it too?
(:

Answer 18

uh i guess. i play guitar and piano and stuff so i might be able to cover it

Answer 19

cool!! please send a copy if you ever get the music to it!!! XD

Answer 20

amazing :D good jod trinn

Answer 21

job

Answer 22

thanks bruuh XD

Answer 23

no prob :)

Answer 24

If you would like an editor to fix the mistakes, I happily volunteer myself ^_^

Answer 25

yes please jackito

Answer 26

sorry @JackofallTradez XD i have a Hispanic friend named jack so i call him jackitoXD

Answer 27

Jackito the Burrito :P

Answer 28

lol

Answer 29

Great poem! I <3 it!

Answer 30

Standing in the rain then there you came
You gave me sunshine and took the storm away
I fell in love, and don't mistake it, I fell hard
You'd help me up then again I would start with you
It's difficult to resist but whispering in my ear
"It's just one more night it will be alright"
But if i fall one more time I'm sure I will break
Being with you puts my heart at stake
But being the gullible person, I am
I will trust you again and again
Until one day I will permanently stumble
But this time I cant recover this fumble
Then here I am crying in the rain
Then there you came you gave me my storm
And took my sunshine away

@<3teddybearhugs<3 the editing is done ^_^

Answer 31

@<3teddybearhugs<3

Answer 32

Fank chuuu👍👍

Answer 33

Yup its official jackito da burrito. You fate is set😂😉

Answer 34

Yay :D

Answer 35

XD