Question

please tell me what you think


love

what is love?
love is pain
love is struggle
love is strength
love is magic
love is deep
love is complicated
but we all learn to survive.
:)

Answer 1

Very noble subject. its rather simple. To try to improve it, dig deeper in more sensory language and make me the reader feel it. Such as instead of "deep" define the word deep in your own creative way (look up the dictionary of obscure sorrows - it might inspire you), and have it flow with the rest of the body. Tie them together.

Answer 2

It's okay. Use better adjectives. and look up synonyms.

Answer 3

I love it!!

Answer 4

can i have a metal

Answer 5

please

Answer 6

a lot of these lines ive heard before i dont mean to sound rude but its not very original. Love is a very tricky subject cause its over done and people tend to be repetitive about it. When writing about anything that has to do with love you need to shout out to the audience. To tell us what makes this unique. I want to hear the same thing over and over again but not in the same way. say the same thing differently. What makes you poem and perspective unique. Show me that.

Answer 7

I'm sure you're very good at poetry because i consider myself descent and ive written similar poems

Answer 8

Really nice, but maybe use some better adjectives. :)