feed back on my poem plz.... i couldn't post a pic that goes with it sadly...

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teresar7 · Answer

The Pillow Case

Snow falls down flatly
morning was here
sun rising slowly
birds sing can’t you hear

breakfast on table
kids waking up
parents with coffee
in their shiny cups

a knock at the door
my grandma was here
small box in her hand
a bow in her hair

Merry Christmas she said
with a mighty big grin
she handed me the box
and their i began

i sat down my box
and then i just smiled
i torn off the tape
it took me awhile

right there it was
a pillow case
she made it by hand 
for this special day


it has three little girls
and my name on it
me and my sisters
i gave her a kiss

three days later
my grandma died
she gave it to me
just in time

i know it was like
8 years ago
but this my friend
i cannot let go

i still cherish the 
pillow case today
so here it is
hand made.

anonymous · Answer

It is absolutely Devine <3 I love it!

teresar7 · Answer

its all true too. i still have it!

anonymous · Answer

It's very cute!

teresar7 · Answer

thank you so very much

anonymous · Answer

You're welcome C: