Question

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Rewrite this thesis statement to make it unified.

Private school enrollment has increased in the past five years because parents have lost confidence in the public schools and are willing to pay the additional cost to enroll their children in private schools.

Answer 1

In the past five years, parents have begun to lose confidence in public schools. Because of this, private school enrollment has increased, as parents are now willing to pay the additional cost for the well being of their children.

Answer 2

Does that help?

Answer 3

Yes thank you @HannahA

Answer 4

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